There was Twitter rave-talk this morning about “Phase editing.” (You can read Lazette Gifford‘s description of it here.) It’s similar to the type of outlining I’m using now, only I list scenes and cluster them into chapters. My outline was about 10,000 words long—Lazette Gifford’s was 14,000.
I think it’s likely true that this type of thinking helps get a novel closer to a readable draft faster (although that remains to be seen at this point). Certainly it’s a security blanket. Canadian novelist Andrew Pyper recommends spending time on an outline as a “dating” sort of ploy: do you want to marry this story? Are you willing to spend years with it?
I could certainly not write a scene outline in two weeks, however. I worked on mine for months, and, frankly, I don’t think I worked on it long enough. (I think I should have given thought to John Truby‘s guidelines on plot—more on that later.)
Writers who don’t use outlines claim that if they did, the writing would be boring. Not so! It’s exciting to see a scene bloom and there are always surprises—a where-did-she-come-from character jumping into center-stage, for example—and always (always!) bogs.
At page 287 and struggling. My characters have become fuzzy. Getting over 1000 words today was tough. “Big scenes” are hard, and if there’s one thing the Court of the Sun King is about, it’s big scenes.
I'm always divided about outlines and I haven't really got a handle on what works for me yet. It's enough – for now – for me to know approximately where the big-ticket items will come up and how they'll play out. The sad part is that I'm not a freewheeling writer; there's enough that's unexpected in this process without my not knowing where I'm going! Will definitely have to find an outline strategy that works.
And thank you, thank you, thank you for the 'fuzzy characters' bit – I go through that too and it scares the bejaysis out of me. I'm sure you'll come out the other side, though – having read your characters it's heartening to know that you've ever struggled with them!
A fan as always,
Sarah